Freefall

Im thinking it could use a different typeface
something bolder would be easier to read against all the swirles
i know its hard to choose a colour, what with all the other colours going on in the background
as it is, its quite hard to see the Ls at the end of freefall
well, i presume it says freefall
hehe, it look a bit like two exclamation marks :] freefa!!
but yeah, it is ridonculously gorgeous, and the colours work really nicely
just the typeface is a little offkey :]